This week for room 9's writing we have been doing procedural writing.
Our learning objective was to write a procedural writing about getting the T.V onto Netflix.
I really like your procedural writing. I think that you should make the docs bigger because it is hard to read when it is like that. Everything besides that is alright! From Dwayne
I really like how you explained how to get onto Netflix on the TV. Great steps. One thing that I think you should change about this slide, is to make this slide bigger but the text more smaller so it fits into the document
Hi Brooklyn, I really like that you've added in clear and easy steps. I think that you should make the box bigger to make it easier to read. Here's a link to my blog if you want to read my stuff:http://wisjamied.blogspot.com/.
I really like your procedural writing. I think that you should make the docs bigger because it is hard to read when it is like that. Everything besides that is alright! From Dwayne
ReplyDeleteI really like how you explained how to get onto Netflix on the TV. Great steps.
ReplyDeleteOne thing that I think you should change about this slide, is to make this slide bigger but the text more smaller so it fits into the document
Hi Brooklyn, I really like that you've added in clear and easy steps. I think that you should make the box bigger to make it easier to read. Here's a link to my blog if you want to read my stuff:http://wisjamied.blogspot.com/.
ReplyDeletehi Brooklyn i liked your perspire writing it was really simple and easy to understand good job and keep up the good work friend
ReplyDeletehi i really like your story you could try to make it bigger over all it was good
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